The pup

[Shasta]

She had woken up early in the morning to go hunting and had left the pup to sleep. As she was strolling through the wild woods, she saw something spring up from the corner of her eye. She got into a stalking pose and jolted up and saw that it had been a rabbit. She held down the rabbit she was about to kill it when she heard a crying howl. She dashed back to the cave; she looked everywhere for the pup. He had been gone.

[Akira]

Akira had been strolling around through the woods for quite some time now searching for prey or predators, but for some reason the prey had been scarce all morning. She laid down in the clearing and licked her mucky paws from going in the river earlier that morning. She heard birds chirping and singing songs around her high in the tree tops and even lower towards the ground but she knew that a small bird would not be enough food to fill her; it wouldn't even be enough to satisfy her until she found dinner. It had been a warm day and the sun beamed through all the trees in the forest lighting up the ground in patches.

Quickly Akira's ears perked up and flipped around in all directions. She heard a noise; a loud howl, but what did it mean? She raced to her feet and jetted towards the outlaying forest. Her pace quickened and she eventually made it to her maximum speed. She hoped the howl did not come from far.

Akira had been traveling for a couple hours now when suddenly she picked up the scent of another wolf. Her moistened nose darted to the ground searching for the trail of the wolf that had been close by. She gave it everything she had and ran again but in a slower pace; she didn't have much energy left after her two hour long run. Finally she picked up the trail. She rushed in the direction of the trail and came upon a cave and a young wolf. She knew this was a lone wolf; the cave was it's home. She couldn't be too trusting but she had to listen. Akira was willing to help any wolf in distress. "My name is Akira. Are you hurt?" The breeze swam through her nostrils and she picked up another scent. There was more than one wolf here.

((OOC: By the way you don't need to write IC in the front of every post. I know that the post is IC because it doesn't say OOC and it isn't indicated like I did with the apostrophes --->(). Also I modified your post a little and corrected your spelling errors again. Your sentence structures are okay but need work.))

[Shasta]

"Hello Akira, I'm Shasta. No I'm not hurt I'm looking for a pup."

[Akira]

Akira circled around Shasta impatiently, "Well Shasta, how could you lost a pup?" A zillion thoughts fled Akira's mind, 'That poor pup! How could you lose a pup?!' Thoughts kept intruding in her mind but she spoke non of them. She managed to keep to herself and stay as calm as possible. She stared intently at the she-wolf, "Is it a girl or boy? What color is he or she? When did you last see him or her? Speak up quick!"

((OOC: Your going to need a LOT longer of a post. This is WAY to short. You need at least three sentences and try to be detailed. And as for the pup, either you can make a pup, or you can find a friend to join and have them make a pup. Those are our best options.))

[Shasta]

"The pup is a boy. He's gray with black paws, he has short floppy ears, his eyes are brown, he has a pink nose, he has a red dot on his right eye. He has a short tail, with short fluffy hair. He's pretty small. The last time I saw him was in the cave, sleeping before I went hunting." 

[Akira]

((OOC: You miss-spelled short 3 times. Each time you spelled it 'sort'.))

Akira tried to remember the description of the young pup, only then would she be able to recognize him. Her legs began to grow tense and her muscles seemed to look stronger by the second. "Why would you leave a young pup alone?!" Suddenly Akira remembered there would be time for questions later, it was time to find that pup. "Alright, forget it. We need to search for him, now. Follow me." She dug her nose into the ground and began to search for the warmest scent.

[Shasta]

She followed Akira. Akira and Shasta have been walking threw the wild wood's for a very long time, It was getting dark out, and it looked like it was going to rain. But Shasta didn't want to give up. After a little longer Shasta and Akira found a better scent of the pup. The scent lead them to a cave. They both entered the dark wet cave, shasta and Akira heard a soft cry in the back of the cave. 

[Akira]

((OOC: Alright so you don't need to say their names over and over again the way you did. It sounds less interesting and childish. And two saying that my character has been running, and what my character has been doing is 'god modding'. It's not aloud. You may only say things about your character UNLESS I said my character was running for miles.))

They had found an extremely new scent. Akira had wandered further into the cave for what had seemed like hours. The further back she traveled it had gotten colder and colder. She could see the ice sickles hang from the top of the cave; ice also began to hang from the tips of her fur on her legs and ears. Could the pup be in here? She hoped not, it was too cold and she was beginning to lose the scent; what once was strong is now fading...

[Shasta]

Her mind is filled with lot's of question's. She want's to know if the pup is in this cave, safe and trying to stay warm. Shasta didn't want to worry anymore. No matter how hard she tried she couldn't stop thinking bad thought's about the pup. Could he be dead or hurt? It was killing her to know. "Do you think the pup is okay? It's pretty cold in this cave, and I'm not sure if he found food since he's been gone."

((OOC: How was that? I know I need to work on it more. Would you helped me more with Role Playing?))